过来人有几个建议
1：转折用though替换but
2：多用副词 例如exactly, basically, really
3：使用从句增色语言 使用简单不易出错
的同位语从句，例如： People are now aware of the fact that many restaurants are not that hygienic.
4：多用强调句式，增加语法的广度
例如：礼物类话题的万年句式： It doesn't matter how expensive the gift is, it's the thought that matters.
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过来人有几个建议
1：转折用though替换but
2：多用副词 例如exactly, basically, really
3：使用从句增色语言 使用简单不易出错
的同位语从句，例如： People are now aware of the fact that many restaurants are not that hygienic.
4：多用强调句式，增加语法的广度
例如：礼物类话题的万年句式： It doesn't matter how expensive the gift is, it's the thought that matters.